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Post by Matt on Jul 14, 2017 6:04:51 GMT
Great job on the logo tweak - love it With the discount card, I've come around to the portrait version a bit. I know we've moved on a little from the initial trading card inspiration, but I still like it best - I think I like the greater space it give to write name and date on the back and the greater sense of space on the front too. It just needs "10% Discount" adding to the white front side, underneath the TM logo (which I would then shuffle up to a central position. And on the back, would it be possible to move the whole of "conjunction" to the next line - centrally justified text should mean this shouldn't look too bad. Lastly (and I'm being super picky now, I realise!), on the rear of the card, can the TM logo be moved up just a tiny amount, so it's vertically centralised between the bottom of the white box and the bottom of the card? Thanks again for your work on this, Laura and James. Top notch results - loving' it!
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Post by Matt H on Jul 14, 2017 11:00:08 GMT
Hi Laura. All those amends look better, good job! The Nexus logo with the 4-high people is definitely more readable and still true to the original so that's great.
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Post by Laura on Jul 14, 2017 18:54:10 GMT
Glad you guys like it Whoops, yeah I forgot about adding the "10% Discount" bit: Personally I preferred the landscape version, but I don't mind particularly.
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Post by Laura on Jul 14, 2017 21:01:25 GMT
Whoops just noticed I fixed the first thing you suggested then didn't do the other things XD I will have a final version up soon.
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Post by Matt on Jul 15, 2017 6:14:37 GMT
No problem. If it's easy enough, put the "10% Discount" on the landscape version as well and then lets put it to a forum vote - they're both good, so lets go with majority decision
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Post by Laura on Jul 17, 2017 15:37:21 GMT
Now that I try to put the 10% discount on the landscape one, I'm not sure which I prefer. I moved everything around a little, to make it fit as best I could. A vote is a good idea. Portrait updates:
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Post by steve on Jul 17, 2017 16:56:34 GMT
Mmmm...landscape...maybe...I think... Excellent work Laura!
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Post by Matt on Jul 17, 2017 17:05:29 GMT
Great job Laura. If you can post these in a new poll thread I will email the membership to make sure they know and encourage them to vote.
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Post by James on Jul 18, 2017 20:46:49 GMT
This was all like 90% Laura, all I did was to digitise the logo and that's about it. So props to Laura for putting in the effort, the leaflets especially look great.
I like the landscape card, personally.
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